Thursday 14 May 2020

Descriptive writing Superman

Superman is really fast. Superman has laser eyes and a super punch. He has a really hard landing and he breaks the floor. He lands really fast. He is like a lightning bolt. He came from the world of Iron. He is tough and bulletproof. He has really short hair. Superman is in the Justice League. I watched the movie, Superman.

2 comments:

  1. Great descriptive writing Ellie. I like how you used a similie in your writing. I hope you enjoyed the movie.

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  2. I wish I could do some writing like you. I liked how it was very descriptive.

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