Tuesday 12 May 2020

Descriptive Writing


The wolf is in disguise in a house. A dress, slippers and glasses are worn by a wolf. She is pretty. The wolf is pretending to be sick because Little Red Riding Hood was going over to her Grandma’s to give her some muffins and she got there and the wolf ate Little Red Riding Hood.

2 comments:

  1. Great ideas for your writing Ellie. Poor Little Red Riding Hood. What a cunning wolf.

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  2. Hi Ellie,
    I'm Charlotte from Marshland school and I really like your writing, you displayed it really well Keep it up!
    Bye see you next time

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